|Brian Rea (NYT)|
Answer (for me): this book is too (er) syllabular. What? There are two ways to write a book (besides all the other ways!). A book can be thesis-driven, with every chapter, section, paragraph, and sentence playing some role in advancing the thesis. And then a book can simply cover a topic, with the outline being much like the syllabus for a course. Academics are in the habit of creating syllabi, so it's very natural for them to write books that are ... syllabular.
Better Angels is about 50% thesis-driven, and 50% syllabular. In just one of Pinker's hundred-page chapters (ouch), there are dozens of pages that are (it seems to me) pedagogically motivated. I'm not against learning (!), but prefer thesis-driven writing. The perfect example: Jared Diamond's book Guns, Germs, and Steel. Diamond does not set hmself up as "the professor" educating his reader on all things "geography", but as answering a question (and a great question too). The reader is thus carried along by a desire to find out the answer, whereas (for me anyway), Angels doesn't have that sort of momentum. You keep going because the course isn't over yet, not because the thesis is still being developed or hasn't been fully supported. At times no thesis is directly in view--we're just being very exhaustively taught the subject of violence through the ages and its causes.
On to substance. Having spent so much time with Pinker in the last two months (I'm a slow reader), I have a pretty good feel for what's on his mind (I think). Pinker doesn't like political correctness and fashionable nonsense. One thing he doesn't like is the tendency of liberals to think the sky is falling--"Everything's getting so much worse, what is the world coming to?" Not only is this an annoyingly fashionable view of the world, it's flat out false. So he argues, drawing on vast amounts of history, data, etc. I found this part of the book mostly persuasive, but perhaps sooner than I was meant to. A more skeptical reader might be more engrossed by all the evidence and take more pleasure in being slowly won over to Pinker's view.
Then there are all Pinker's explanations. This would have been a more exciting book if he had been able to point to 2-3 causes of the decline of violence, but he points to dozens. The development of Enlightenment ideas about human rights and equality. The spread of literacy, so people became better at entering the point of view of others. Hygiene, believe it or nor. Disgustingly smelly people with bad breath are not as hard to torture and kill. Confidence about the future, so that there's something worth avoiding violence for. The "expanding circle," in Peter Singer's sense, so more and more people (and even animals) started to count. A shift away from moralities centering on honor, community, the sacred, and incommensurable values--this stuff generates violence; a shift toward moralities centering on harm and fairness. And a lot of other stuff. This is the kitchen sink theory about declining violence--sadly the truth is not always satisfyingly simple.
I have just a few substantive objections. One concerns the decline of violence toward animals--just one of the many trajectories Pinker traces. I think Pinker massages the data a bit, to make it tell a "getting better all the time" story. And it could be that he does the same thing elsewhere in the book--I'd love to see responses to his history-telling and criminology from experts on the many topics he covers.
So--things seem horrendous for animals now, right? There's factory farming on a massive scale, and millions of animals are also used in medical research. How is it that things are getting better? Pinker makes his case partly by showing they used to be worse than we thought. There are some fascinating passages here about tenderization of meat in the 17th century. It turns out they tenderized live animals by whipping them with knotted ropes. Nice. Amazingly enough, confinement farming was known to these people as well. The Elizabethans fattened pigs by confining them to small spaces and birds were fattened by being nailed to the floor or having their legs cut off. Considering where we were centuries ago, it's no longer obvious that things have gotten worse.
Yet its important to know how often animals were treated in these horrifying ways in the 17th century. If these were just the excesses of the rich, the scope of modern violence toward animals is much more vast. Not only are there way more of us, so more animals are suffering, but per capita meat consumption has risen. Each human is no more savage, and probably less savage, but the total amount of "bad" is much greater. This matters, surely (more on that below).
Pinker says as far as biomedical research on animals goes, things are not just no worse, but actually better. Here we have not just scant attention to questions of scale, but some outright errors. Or at least, statements that will mislead many readers. For example, Pinker writes,
Not only are live animals now protected from being hurt, stressed, or killed in the conduct of science, but in high school biology labs the venerable custom of dissecting pickled frogs has gone the way of inkwells and slide rules." (p. 465)
What does it mean to say "live animals are now protected from being hurt, stressed, or killed in the conduct of science"? I would think it means they are no longer being hurt, stressed, or killed in the conduct of science. But that's obviously untrue. Here are some estimates of the number of animals used in animal labs from lab vet Larry Carbone's excellent book What Animals Want - and of course they're all stressed, most are killed, many are hurt.
Perhaps what Pinker meant by "protected from" is that someone's minding the lab. There are regulations that cover exactly how much animals are stressed and hurt and how many are killed. Yes there are, and that's evidence for a decline of violence. But Pinker exaggerates how much protection the regulations afford animals. He says the Institutional Animal Care and Use Committees (IACUCs) that review research protocols do things like regulating "the size of cages, the amount and quality of food and veterinary care, and the opportunities for exercise and social contact..." (p. 456) Yes, all that's spelled out in the Animal Welfare Act. But then he says "Any experiment that would subject an animal to discomfort or distress is placed in a category governed by special regulations and must be justified by its likelihood of providing 'a greater benefit to science and human welfare.'"
Unfortunately, there's no reference associated with the quote within the quote. That passage is not part of the Animal Welfare Act. I can only guess that he may have been thinking of the "The Sundowner Principles" a standard that does involve cost-benefit balancing. This is a standard that's not part of the AWA mandate; the committees do not have to think in these terms. Of course, if they do anyway, it's fair for Pinker to say so. But they don't. At least, this is what Larry Carbone argues in his book, based on nearly 20 years of serving on these committees, and based on research on how they operate.
Carbone is emphatic that IACUCs are not ethics committees, precisely. They take it for granted that most research will be authorized, whatever the balance between costs to animals and benefit to humans. Animals can be "asked" to suffer a lot, for the sake of relatively trivial gains to people, like the gains involved in developing new cosmetic procedures. The committees merely make sure that research that's done--possibly with a troubling cost-benefit balance--is done using no more animals than necessary, and no more stress and suffering than necessary. The committees do important work on behalf of animals, but they don't entertain the possibility that some research is unacceptable no matter how it's done, because the gains to humans aren't worth the losses endured by animals. Gains to humans are always (or at least almost always) worth pursuing, though the idea is that we should select less painful routes to these gains, other things being equal.
I think Pinker is right that today open cruelty to animals is not tolerated. There are expectations that we will not be wantonly cruel or blood thirsty, and labs are supposed to be clean places with at least minimally decent shelter, food, and veterinary care. Blatant violence and negligence are no longer tolerated. For all that we have more humane intentions, though, and we're required by law to have humane intentions, there are now more suffering animals in the world than ever before, and not just because there are more of us. There are also more animals per capita--more are being used to support the diet, health, clothing, etc., of each individual human being.
A puzzling issue about the book has to do with the way Pinker assesses amounts of violence. We are not to think violence has increased just because of the huge death toll of 20th century conflicts. Numbers have to be seen relative to the size of the world's population.
... while the 20th century certainly had more violent deaths than earlier ones, it also have more people. The population of the world in 1950 was 2.5 billion, which is about two and a half times the population in 1800, four and a half times that in 1600, seven times that in 1300, and fifteen times that of 1 CE. So the death count of a war in 1600, for instance, would have to be multiplied by 4.5 for us to compare its destructiveness to those in the middle of the 20th century.Suppose, as Pinker observes, Cain wiped out 25% of the world's population when he killed Abel. There were just Adam, Eve, Cain, and Abel, when he committed fratricide. Now suppose that today history (sort of) repeats itself, and 25% of the world's population suddenly gets wiped out by fratricidal lunatics. That's 1.75 billion people. Is it the same?
Well, in a way it is. Human nature hasn't gotten any more fratricidal since Cain's time, if 25% of people are wiped out on both occasions. And the risk to any person of being a fratricide victim is the same. From a moral perspective, though, all is not the same. The 2011 Great Fratricide generates a vastly larger quantity of bad. If God is a utilitarian, and wants to intervene just once, he'll prevent the Great Fratricide. Likewise, those who let the Great Fratricide transpire have more to answer for than those who let Cain's fratricide transpire. We who are now too passive in the face of huge slaughters are morally worse than people in earlier times who watched the same percentage of humanity be wiped out. If the total amount of "bad" is greater, there is more reason to stop a slaughter, and more reason to condemn those who fail to do so.
So we can agree with Pinker that violence is not increasing, but also think there's a basis for growing concern. The bloodbaths we're failing to prevent involving larger and larger total amounts of death and suffering. It shouldn't soothe the conscience that deaths are not increasing, relative to the total human population.
So much for some scattered thoughts. If you've read the book, tell me what you think.